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The Legend of Elora: Winter’s Welcome by K.M. Bonde

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The Legend of Elora: Winter’s Welcome is the second book in the Legend of Elora series by K.M. Bonde. For more information on the book, click the link below to see the listing on Amazon.

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Anyone up for a little Friday self-editing tip? If Anyone up for a little Friday self-editing tip? If you’re like me and plan on writing this weekend, this might be useful! And if you aren’t writing this weekend, tap that little save button for later. 😉 You’re probably looking at this list and wondering why I’ve included some body language words on it. In my work, I find that when drafting--and even during self-editing--many authors rely heavily on basic body language to start conveying action in the scene. There’s nothing wrong with that when drafting, and sometimes these actions are useful! A timely shrug or glance can speak volumes in the right context. But when your characters are ALWAYS shrugging, or sighing, or looking, or glancing, well...you can see how that starts to get repetitive and boring. If your beta readers, CP, or even editor call you out on a specific body language you overuse, make a note of it for future drafts. Search for that word(s) and its variations (like shrugged vs. shrugging) to figure out areas to revise on your own. As for words like “quickly” and “very,” these don’t often convey what you want them to and are filler words. That being said, they can be useful in situations like dialogue! Example? “Quickly,” the guard said, “you must hurry.” And please, remember, everything in writing is about balance. These self-editing lists you find only are helpful, but you probably don’t have to cut out EVERY instance of EVERY word on them. Use this as a guide, then try to use your best judgment on what to cut, keep, and revise. QOTD: What’s your secret ‘overused body language’ word or phrase? My first draft was FULL of eye rolls 😂 👀🙄😒 ° ° ° #commonmistakes #authortips #writerstips #writingtipsandtricks #writersblock #writeyourbook #finishyourbook #writinganovel #writeeveryday #amditing #amdrafting #amrevising #writingtips #writershelpingwriters #writingmood #howtowrite #keepwriting #writerssupportingwriters #bookeditor #writingcoach #copyeditor #freelanceeditor #fantasywriter #amwritingfantasy #amwritingromance #YAwriter #YAauthor #YAauthorsofinstagram #womenwritingfiction #womenwriters
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“Is my novel more YA or NA? Is NA even popular? “Is my novel more YA or NA? Is NA even popular? Can my NA characters fit in a YA novel?” A lot of my work as an editor is on books in the YA and NA categories, and I get a lot of questions from authors about the differences. NA was born out of YA, an easy naming convention for those books that bridged the gap between Young Adult and Adult. Which, if you think about, makes sense: you don’t suddenly have Big Adult Problems when you hit 18. There’s a transitional period, and that’s what NA tackles. NA is still a new-ish concept in publishing, but it’s gaining traction with publishers, and readers *want* it. Just look at the popularity of books like ACOTAR and Red, White & Royal Blue--a bit older than traditional YA but definitely popular! So, how do YA and NA fit together? YOUNG ADULT 📗 MCs generally aged 12-18 📘 Themes like first loves, early relationships, self-identity, friendship, mental health, and general coming-of-age; may include a loss of innocence 📕 Characters lack life experience & perspective at the beginning 📙 This is the “middle and high school” period of life -- teenage years with lots of change NEW ADULT 📗 MCs generally aged 18-30 📘 Themes like relationships, first or second loves, and mental health, but also self-empowerment, self-discovery, fear of failure, and loss of innocence as characters step into “real” adulthood 📕 Characters usually have *some* experience & perspective (though not necessarily a lot!) 📙 This is the college years & early career period of life There’s definitely crossover between the two categories, both in minor ways like character age (17-19 range) but also in themes. A lot of the change that begins in YA continues through NA as people continue evolving into their true selves. Are you writing in either of these categories? My WIP is a NA fantasy novel! ° ° #indiesareworthit #selfpublishingcommunity #aspiringindieauthors #selfpubauthors #indieauthorsbeseen #indieauthorlove #selfpublished #indiepub #bookpublishing #bookeditor #bookcoach #writingcoach #fantasywriter #amwritingfantasy #fantasyauthor #romanceauthor #romancewriter #amwritingromance #writingtipsandtricks #writersblock #writeyourbook #finishyourbook
When does worldbuilding or narration turn into inf When does worldbuilding or narration turn into info dumping? A book I’m currently reading for fun had me almost ready to DNF. The opening chapters were great, picking up where the cliffhanger ending of the previous book left things. The plot was progressing, we were getting glimpses of worldbuilding and the characters, and then… Everything came to a grinding halt. Gone was the action, replaced instead by lengthy descriptions of morning routines, the same convos repeating over and over, and inner monologues so long I found myself skipping them. This book is ~200k words, and the author could’ve cut about 60-70k without losing the plot or character development that did happen in the muddled middle. Worldbuilding & narration are important, but how do you know when you’ve crossed the line into info dump territory? 🤔 📚 Flag scenes and conversations that are markedly similar. There’s a good chance the repetitive ones can be condensed, cut, or changed. 📚 Ask beta readers if they got bored at any point. That’s a sign of either an info dump or poor pacing (or both, tbh). 📚 Determine what each scene does for the story. Does it somehow advance the story or force characters to make a decision? 📚 Is the worldbuilding info presented relevant in that moment? We often do more worldbuilding as authors than readers need to see--or it can be spread out more, discovered as it’s relevant to the story overall. Don’t tell everything all at once. 📚 Check dialogue for info dumps. Writers often try to convey info through dialogue instead to avoid an ‘info dump,’ but it just makes the dialogue stilted and unnaturally, well, info dump-y. Don’t get sucked into this trap! Does a lot of info dumping in books make you give up on them? Are info dumps something you struggle with as you draft? ° ° ° #bookeditor #bookcoach #writingcoach #bookediting #freelanceeditor #indiesareworthit #indiepublishing #selfpublishingcommunity #aspiringindieauthors #indieauthorsofig #selfpubauthors #indieauthorlife #indieauthorsbeseen #indieauthorlove #selfpublished #fantasywriter #amwritingfantasy #fantasyauthor #romanceauthor
Fun fact: many manuscripts I work on are lacking i Fun fact: many manuscripts I work on are lacking interiority. Another fun fact: my CP just told me my own opening chapters need some more interiority! 🤭 I think it’s something most writers struggle with--no shame in that! Interiority sounds fancy, but it’s really just referring to your character’s thoughts, feelings, and internal struggle. It helps readers understand why your character is doing what they’re doing and why they have the goals they do. It’s really important. My top tips on interiority: 📚 Interiority is good ‘telling.’ Remember, some telling is okay. Context is key to understanding. Don’t be afraid to add it. 📚 Use interiority to not only show feelings and thoughts but also personality! A fun, snarky comment in a character’s head can convey both their thoughts on a situation and their sassy side. 📚 Cut out some of your physical descriptions. Clueing readers in to how a character’s body feels can be helpful and good, but I find writers relying on this too much. Change some of those moments to true interiority for balance. 📚 Ask yourself is you can answer the question “why?” Why is your character reacting how they are? Why do they chase that goal? If it’s not clear, you might need more interiority to illustrate why. 📚 Are you combining dialogue and action to also help convey feelings? 📚 Are you exploring emotions--truly exploring--or just naming them? 👀 Don’t forget to check in with your betas and CP about this. Weigh their comments and determine if they’re hinting at interiority (or outright naming it). QOTD: What are some of your favorite ways to use interiority in your manuscript? ° ° ° ° #bookeditor #bookcoach #writingcoach #bookediting #copyeditor #freelanceeditor #indiesareworthit #indiepublishing #selfpublishingcommunity #aspiringindieauthors #indieauthorsofig #selfpubauthors #indieauthorlife #indieauthorsbeseen #indieauthorlove #selfpublished #indiepub #bookpublishing #fantasywriter #amwritingfantasy #fantasyauthor #romanceauthor #romancewriter #amwritingromance #romanticfantasy #romanticfantasywriter
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